Saturday, September 13, 2008

Delineation of a dream

It was December evening and I could see clearly see through the thick fog and smoke that my life was setting foot on a new spring season. The tranquility of the evening ,as if the sky had extended over the land, gave me the impression that 'the mighty Being' is asleep. I tried to compare the ecstasy of experiencing this moment with the portrait of the lady whose arrival I was ardently anticipating. As I reposed, the light from the wax candle on the table seemed to grow inside the darkened room and I could still hear her voice ringing in my head," I have saved this afternoon just for you". It became obvious to me that I was inept to make the comparison. She was the most well-groomed woman I ever saw and I wanted to protect her even though she doesn't need it and that was all I knew. The judgement of right and wrong went beyond me. These solemn thoughts were broken when I saw the five cups of coffee I finished in the last four hours. The restaurant was half-deserted. The ruminations had looked after me and my solitude as we utterly took possession of the 'the table reserved for two'.

7 comments:

Rojit said...

too bad for u dude... u r making huge changes in your writings... keep up the good work..!!
and sorry dude, i couldn't come to your date.. i missed the coffee..lolz...

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

wah ji 1st date in solitary confinement ! not bad , waise this was quite a departure from your usual style , keep it up ( i hope i didn't sound like some teacher writing remarks on the report card]

jamzz said...

lol
I hope the change is for the better.
Lets see if I can better myself :)
But its good for me that people are recognizing this change

del said...

good work buddy...more of poetic flow in your writing these days!but sorry about your first date!

Sushant said...

bad luck but good blog... nice style of writing.

sushma said...

hmmm...beautifully written...couldnt have been better i should say...
By the way who was she?? :P
anyways...keep posting ...love reading ur blogs

jamzz said...

Lets just say she is special enough to enter my dreams :)
One of my friends told me 'to be heart broken is one of the most beautiful things in the world'. I still haven't understood it